How to make this read variedly and soomthly?

Hi there,

I wrote this passage, but it reads boring. Could you help me fix this?
If possible please add something to make it longer, I do NOT want it to be concise.
Thank you very much.



Bbser

In 2002, our community had 4000 adults. Over the next 5 years, the population boomed sharply to 5000, a one quarter growth. At the same time, the number of adult smokers decreased sharply from 400 in 2002 to 300 in 2007, which might reflect greater awareness of the adverse effects of smoking. Another good news was that the number of adults who had high blood pressure moderately dropped from 400 to 350. Unfortunately, the survey reported a slight rise in the number of smokers who also had high blood pressure, with 200 in 2002 and 250 in 2007.