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Sanoj Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

How to make this poem gramatical and more natural?

this is my attempt to make an English poem, Please help me

May Nobel truths spread all over the universe!

Life is a mysterious Enigma,
which coves the unique truth from your eyes,

Through the sight of the wisdom,
you are enabled to solve the enigma and experience the reality,

Don’t waste your precious time for impermanence amusements,

time is running fast, even you haven't aware about it.

Hasten to find the key of wisdom from the hands of enlightenment,
to finish your endless suffering
  

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Not a poem, really-- just a group of exhortative sentences. May noble truths spread all over the universe Life is a mysterious enigma , which hides the unique truth from your eyes, Through the sight of wisdom , you can solve the enigma and experience reality. Don’t waste your precious time on impermanent amusements.

  • Not a poem, really-- just a group of exhortative sentences.
  • May noble truths spread all over the universe Life is a mysterious enigma , which hides the unique truth from your eyes, Through the sight of wisdom , you can solve the enigma and experience reality.
  • Don’t waste your precious time on impermanent amusements.
  • Time is running fast-- you just aren't aware of it.
  • Hasten to find the key to wisdom in the hands of enlightenment, to end your endless suffering.
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Not a poem, really-- just a group of exhortative sentences.


May noble truths spread all over the universe

Life is a mysterious enigma,
which hides the unique truth from your eyes,

Through the sight of wisdom,
you can solve the enigma and experience reality.

Don’t waste your precious

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