If we write something for you, then we would be doing your homework. Why don't you try first and then let us correct what you have written afterwards. John
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Good try, Penny. I’m pleased to help you.
The most important thing about paraphrasing is to capture the essence of what the author said without using all of his exact words. You have simply rearranged the words and that is not correct. You have to think of NEW words, not just reuse the old ones. You may use some original words (as I have done) as long as