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Namio Posted 17 years ago
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How to Make It More Natural

Could someone please correct this dialogue into more natural one?

I will offer a oral communication "practice" class in my teacher-training course. In the practice class, I am going to use this dialogue as a teaching material.

At high school
[A chaim is ringing.]

Student A: I finished all my classes.
Student B: Hey, What are you going to do today?
A: I'm going to go to dinner with my girlfriend, but I have no idea where to go.
Do you know any special places?
B: How about --------? This restaurant has various kinds of meals.
A: I haven't heard of the name. What meals do you most recommend?
B: I reccomend ---------. You will be satisfied with the amount as well as the low cost.
A: That sounds nice. Tell me how to get there. Which station is the nearest?
B: I think ---------station is. It only takes less than a minute from the station.
You can find the restaurant as soon as you get out the station.
A: Thank you. I'll go there.
B: You're welcome. Enjoy your dating!
  

Top answer

My humble contribution: (1) At a high school. The bell is ringing. (2) I've finished my classes for the day.

  • My humble contribution: (1) At a high school.
  • The bell is ringing.
  • (2) I've finished my classes for the day.
  • (3) So what are your plans for the rest of the day?
  • (in conversation, it's not "natural" to say "to go" because you already have one "go"), but I have no idea where.
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My humble contribution: (1) At a high school. The bell is ringing. (2) I've finished my classes for the day. (3) So what are your plans for the rest of the day? (4)I'm going to dinner with....(in conversation, it's not "natural" to say "to go" because you already have one "go"), but I have no idea where. (5) Do you know any place special (nice)? That restaurant has all kinds of dishes. (6) Enjoy

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