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Wang.cupid Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
How to make it more English?
Hi everybody, could you please make the following paragraph more English. Although I guess there are not many grammatical errors, the paragraph is not really like that written by native English speakers.
I am really honored to get an admission letter from the University of S and will be supervised by Dr. L, who has promised to fund me $1500 per month. In addition to this, I have also deposited $20, 000 to cover possible expenditures during the period of my PhD study. The deposit comes from my personal savings. Actually I have worked at the Faculty of Computer and Information since July 2002. The income details in the last three years are as follows.
Thank you very much!
I am really honored to get an admission letter from the University of S and will be supervised by Dr. L, who has promised to fund me $1500 per month. In addition to this, I have also deposited $20, 000 to cover possible expenditures during the period of my PhD study. The deposit comes from my personal savings. Actually I have worked at the Faculty of Computer and Information since July 2002. The income details in the last three years are as follows.
Thank you very much!
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I am really honored to have received get an admission letter from the University of S . During my tenure, I will be supervised by Dr. L, who has promised to fund me with a stipend of $1500 per month.
- I am really honored to have received get an admission letter from the University of S .
- During my tenure, I will be supervised by Dr.
- L, who has promised to fund me with a stipend of $1500 per month.
- In addition to this, I have also deposited $20, 000 to cover (extraordinary / miscellaneous) possible expenditures during the period of my PhD study.
- This deposit comes from my personal savings.
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I am really honored to have received get an admission letter from the University of S. During my tenure, I will be supervised by Dr. L, who has promised to fund me with a stipend of $1500 per month. In addition to this, I have also deposited $20, 000 to cover (extraordinary / miscellaneous) possible expenditures during the period of my
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