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Solalexander Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
How to make catchy phrases and slogans... ?
Dear native English speakers!
Recently I've faced a little language problem.
I've created a site for voting and tried to motivate people to visit it with a couple of phrases like:
"I think Natalie is cooler than Keira. Click to vote."
"keira vs. natalie, cast your vote or create your own battle at coolometer.org"
"Windows or Linux? Vote for your favorite!"
"Coolometer. Cast a vote or create your own fight."
But after a month I see that people vote when they're on site, but have no interest in visiting it from the outside. I think that's because of my bad english
Could you help me to make this phrases more catchy, please?
Recently I've faced a little language problem.
I've created a site for voting and tried to motivate people to visit it with a couple of phrases like:
"I think Natalie is cooler than Keira. Click to vote."
"keira vs. natalie, cast your vote or create your own battle at coolometer.org"
"Windows or Linux? Vote for your favorite!"
"Coolometer. Cast a vote or create your own fight."
But after a month I see that people vote when they're on site, but have no interest in visiting it from the outside. I think that's because of my bad english
Could you help me to make this phrases more catchy, please?
Top answer
Hello, solaalexander - and welcome to English Forums. Actually, I see nothing wrong with your catchy phrases except some small punctuation and phrasing: "I think Natalie is cooler than Keira. " " K eira vs.
- Hello, solaalexander - and welcome to English Forums.
- Actually, I see nothing wrong with your catchy phrases except some small punctuation and phrasing: "I think Natalie is cooler than Keira.
- " " K eira vs.
- org" "Windows or Linux?
- " "Coolometer.
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Hello, solaalexander - and welcome to English Forums.
Actually, I see nothing wrong with your catchy phrases except some small punctuation and phrasing:
"I think Natalie is cooler than Keira. Click to vote."
"Keira vs. Natalie – cast your vote or create your own competition at Coolometer.org"
"Windows or Linux? Vote for your favorite!
Actually, I see nothing wrong with your catchy phrases except some small punctuation and phrasing:
"I think Natalie is cooler than Keira. Click to vote."
"Keira vs. Natalie – cast your vote or create your own competition at Coolometer.org"
"Windows or Linux? Vote for your favorite!
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Yes, of course 
I've just wanted to make sure that my english don't repel visitors.
Thank you, Mister Micawber, for your co
I've just wanted to make sure that my english don't repel visitors.Thank you, Mister Micawber, for your co
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