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Zuotengdazuo Posted 9 years ago
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It must be noted that there is presently an intensely increasing collusion between regional terrorists and drug-related criminals, which vindicates a systematic campaign to handle both of them through anti-terrorism and drug-banning.


It's my version of translation from a Chinese article. Could you please tell me how to improve it?

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This is the key version:

What merits caution is that there is a growing tendency of terrorists and drug criminals colluding with each other in the region. Therefore, counter-terrorism and anti-narcotic efforts should be integrated with a two-pronged approach.

  

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Why would this teacher give you a "standard version" or as you put it the "key version" while the purpose is to test your ability to translate a Chinese para into English?

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