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"We are shocked and saddened by the selective and unjust prosecution of Mr. James Kinder, who is a scapegoat of the police brutality that has long troubled the American society."
  

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What about no who here: We are shocked and saddened by the selective and unjust prosecution of Mr. James Kinder, a scapegoat of the police brutality that has long troubled the American society.

  • What about no who here: We are shocked and saddened by the selective and unjust prosecution of Mr.
  • James Kinder, a scapegoat of the police brutality that has long troubled the American society.
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What about no who here:

We are shocked and saddened by the selective and unjust prosecution of Mr. James Kinder, a scapegoat of the police brutality that has long troubled the American society.

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