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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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On July 10 she attended the office of the general practitioner and Jane got a preventive vaccine; the next vaccine is scheduled after eight months.

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eg On July 10 Jane attended the office of the general practitioner and got a vaccination. The next one is scheduled after eight months. eg On July 10 Jane got vaccinated by her GP.

  • eg On July 10 Jane attended the office of the general practitioner and got a vaccination.
  • The next one is scheduled after eight months.
  • eg On July 10 Jane got vaccinated by her GP.
  • Her next shot is in eight months .
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eg On July 10 Jane attended the office of the general practitioner and got a vaccination. The next one is scheduled after eight months.

eg On July 10 Jane got vaccinated by her GP. Her next shot is in eight months.

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