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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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How to improve this sentence?
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I am having troubles with the following sentence!
If Jane's parents will request a meeting with their daughter, guardian will allow that only if she will be sure that such meeting is safe for Jane – under no circumstances the parents may be under the influence of alcohol or other substances, and they must not be aggressive.
How can I improve it?
Thanks guys!
I am having troubles with the following sentence!
If Jane's parents will request a meeting with their daughter, guardian will allow that only if she will be sure that such meeting is safe for Jane – under no circumstances the parents may be under the influence of alcohol or other substances, and they must not be aggressive.
How can I improve it?
Thanks guys!
Top answer
The guardian will honor Jane's parents' requests to meet with their daughter only if Jane's safety at such meetings can be assured. Under no circumstances may the parents be under the influence of drugs or alcohol. The guardian will terminate any meeting should the parents become aggressive.
- The guardian will honor Jane's parents' requests to meet with their daughter only if Jane's safety at such meetings can be assured.
- Under no circumstances may the parents be under the influence of drugs or alcohol.
- The guardian will terminate any meeting should the parents become aggressive.
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The guardian will honor Jane's parents' requests to meet with their daughter only if Jane's safety at such meetings can be assured. Under no circumstances may the parents be under the influence of drugs or alcohol. The guardian will terminate any meeting should the parents become aggressive.
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