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Sarah_92 Posted 18 years ago
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I gasped, “Oh, go on then, but be quick before the rain gets too fast.” Since I could hear thunder which was continuously rumbling in the background.

an alternative word for gasped? as it doesn't fit in well. 
  

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” Since too heavy" since I could hear thunder which was continuously rumbling in the background. an alternative word for gasped? as it doesn't fit in well.

  • ” Since too heavy" since I could hear thunder which was continuously rumbling in the background.
  • an alternative word for gasped?
  • as it doesn't fit in well.
  • shouted screamed panted Depends on what is happening.
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Sarah_92I gasped, “Oh, go on then, but be quick before the rain gets too fast.” Since too heavy" since I could hear thunder which was continuously rumbling in the background.

an alternative word for gasped? as it doesn't fit in well.

shouted
screamed
panted

Depends on what is happening.

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