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Please be noticed that as the sports division requests to reserve all the soccer pitches to hold the soccer competition for disable person from 0800 to 2100 on 12 April 2017, please assist to put the starting date of arranged soccer training course off from 12 April 2017, 0900-1000 to 19 April 2017, 0900-1000 to accommodate the soccer competition. Thank you.
  

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The sports division wants to reserve all the soccer pitches for the soccer competition for disabled persons from 0800 to 2100 on 12 April. Please postpone the start of the soccer training course from 12 April to 19 April, 0900-1000. Thank you.

  • The sports division wants to reserve all the soccer pitches for the soccer competition for disabled persons from 0800 to 2100 on 12 April.
  • Please postpone the start of the soccer training course from 12 April to 19 April, 0900-1000.
  • Thank you.
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The sports division wants to reserve all the soccer pitches for the soccer competition for disabled persons from 0800 to 2100 on 12 April. Please postpone the start of the soccer training course from 12 April to 19 April, 0900-1000. Thank you.

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