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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

How to fix an awkward and run-on sentence

hello i was told that my sentence was awkard and a runon. May you please help me in correcting it. thank you Emotion: smile

1) As they keep believing they are successful in avoiding their fate they fail in overcoming it.
  

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Hello. I was told that my sentence was awkward and a run-on . Would/Could you please help me in correcting i t?

— Mister Micawber

  • Hello.
  • I was told that my sentence was awkward and a run-on .
  • Would/Could you please help me in correcting i t?
  • Thank you.
  • -- Your sentence is not a run-on sentence, and it is not awkward; it only needs a change in conjunction and a comma: Because/Although they keep believing they are successful in avoiding their fate, they fail in overcoming it.
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Hello. I was told that my sentence was awkward and a run-on. Would/Could you please help me in correcting it? Thank you. -- Your sentence is not a run-on sentence, and it is not awkward; it only needs a change in conjunction and a comma:

Because/Although they keep believing they are successful in avoiding their fate, they fail in o
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