How to correct write a series of actions?
I have a question regarding the following paragraph. As you can see, there is a lot of repetition in the use of the subject 'They'. Is this correct? Is there a better way to write this sort of sentence?
"In this space, customers can enable, disable and manage services; they can read and act upon notifications, they can control their data and information, and they can see relevant stats and information about their behaviour."
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I'd write it like this. " Clive
- I'd write it like this.
- " Clive
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I'd write it like this.
In this space, customers can enable, disable and manage services, read and act upon notifications, control their data and information, and see relevant stats and information about their behaviour."
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