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Kingston123 Posted 9 years ago
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How to correct this sentence?

Sentence: Bob, who Laura thinks who is responsible for pages
which are missing in Laura's secret diary and
Laura always afraid of Bob.

  

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Two options, 1. closer to the original, Laura is always afraid of Bob, who she thinks is responsible for pages which are missing from her secret diary. 2.

  • Two options, 1.
  • closer to the original, Laura is always afraid of Bob, who she thinks is responsible for pages which are missing from her secret diary.
  • 2.
  • Better worded Laura is always afraid of Bob, who she thinks has the missing pages from her secret diary.
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Two options,

1. closer to the original,  
Laura is always afraid of Bob, who she thinks is responsible for pages
which are missing from her secret diary.

2. Better worded

Laura is always afraid of Bob, who she thinks has the missing pages
from her secret diary.

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