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The frightening is my life….
This topic got two important character that is Ah Cun and Ah Kan……
Ah Cun is a boss who open a small sundries shop in this shop got second floor. He lives with their family.
One day, Ah Cun went to second floor to took items. He opened the door and he was realizes there were no people at the second floor. Suddenly, me was laughing because I forgot already that is all member of my family was going to travel a days. At that time I were so tired , I moving to my room to take a nap and he saw someone is sleeping in his bed but he remember there was no people at there. He feel weird and wanna ask who is you?
Same at that time, I were asking who are you? Suddenly the people who was sleeping in my bed were woke up and it was a girl, she was wearing a red skirt. Her’s eye was so fierce, red and horrible. And she was stare at me and my eye were looking with each other. My body suddenly become 0 Celcius, my hair straight and cold sweat also coming out. It about 10 minutes we were staring with each other. Suddenly got ‘pop’sound at outside so my eye also change the sight to see. And then he were realizes the ghost girl were gone already. After that, I was calm down and took what I want to the shop.
About 9 o’clock in the night, my family were came back. I was close my shop and go back to the second floor. I don’t want to tell them because I don’t want them worry about this thing. At then I was ready to sleep and I think about this afternoon situation is real or my dream. After a few day, I think this is not real but suddenly I have same feeling like that day I just doing nothing and calm down. Until this night, i feel somebody sleep beside me, I were so scare but I acting like don’t know and just sleep until morning.
[ Second important character were in]
At the morning, I were wake up and telling to my heart me so lucky because yesterday nothing happen. After a few hours, Ah Kan coming to my shop and I invite him to my second floor to drink coffee. We two were chit-chat about half an hours ago it was so happy. Suddenly, Ah Kan take his phone for taking photo with me for become sign of memorable.
After this, Ah Kan went back to the home and laying to the sofa to watch that photo that I take with Ah Cun . One of that picture suddenly the background were more than one people, but that people that i don't know and then look not so clear just a white shadow in the photo. I think i was too old my eyes got some problem so i were wipe my eye and i was looking back to that photo but this time not same because it was more than before. Oh my god i think i want faint already. I think Ah Cun’s house got problem so I also take the phone and call him out.
About 10 minutes, Ah Cun and Ah Kan were meeting and Ah Kan was telling what happen before this. After, Ah Kan was finish saying Ah Cun also tell him before this got what happen in my home. Ah Cun was Bluetooth the photo to his phone ask asking Ah Kan delete the photo or just change the news phone. After that, in the decision I have to told to my family what happened before they were not at home and take the photo to give them see. After that, in the result of my family were asked the priest came to the house to drive away ghosts. My family and I, Ah Cun were seeing priest fighting with the many of the ghost. It was about one hours ago, finally the priest was lose.
Lastly, my family so scare about the family of ghost will be disturbed so we make a big decision to move to another place and my shop forced to close.