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Kingston123 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

How to construct this sentence in correct way?

I used too many "and" while constructing this sentence:

My idea about first scene should be showing street kid staying in a jail
, reading his book and then slowly fades into the movie showing his life and
finally movie ends by showing he back to jail and got released
and settled as stage performer.

  

Top answer

You should try to break it into more than one sentence. OK?

  • You should try to break it into more than one sentence.
  • OK?
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You should try to break it into more than one sentence. OK?

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