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Hi. Your essay starts out like you're doing an essay on the economy. I had no idea it was a motivation letter until the second sentence of the second paragraph.
- Hi.
- Your essay starts out like you're doing an essay on the economy.
- I had no idea it was a motivation letter until the second sentence of the second paragraph.
- I think you need to restructure the essay.
- Start by saying that you'd like to study economics at the Univeristy of X for a number of reasons.
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Hi.
Your essay starts out like you're doing an essay on the economy. I had no idea it was a motivation letter until the second sentence of the second paragraph.
I think you need to restructure the essay. Start by saying that you'd like to study economics at the Univeristy of X for a number of reasons. Then say why you think the field is a good field, then the part about why that
Your essay starts out like you're doing an essay on the economy. I had no idea it was a motivation letter until the second sentence of the second paragraph.
I think you need to restructure the essay. Start by saying that you'd like to study economics at the Univeristy of X for a number of reasons. Then say why you think the field is a good field, then the part about why that
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