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Williamjp Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

How to compose this sentence?

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00I have written this sentence. But it sounds strange.02br
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00Do you have any better way to compose it?02br
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00I am determined to become better skilled in this field so that I can be better positioned in the future to help people in my country, which is still a developing economy, to enjoy longer, healthier and wealthier lives.0-
  

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02font 02br 02br 00It's a long sentence with a lot of thoughts packed into it. My first thought is to split it into shorter sentences. eg, trying to keep your words as much as possible, 01font 00I am determined to become better skilled in this field.

— Clive

  • 02font 02br 02br 00It's a long sentence with a lot of thoughts packed into it.
  • My first thought is to split it into shorter sentences.
  • eg, trying to keep your words as much as possible, 01font 00I am determined to become better skilled in this field.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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00It's a long sentence with a lot of thoughts packed into it. My
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0Hi, Clive,02br
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00That really sounds perfect .02br
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00Thank you very much for the help02br
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00Williamjp0-
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