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Ayan86 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

How to change this sentence?

Hi!
How to change this sentence?

The father’s attitude towards the children is apathetic, he has never shown any interest in them, and neither does he show it now.

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How do you want it changed? By the way, your first comma needs to be a period/full stop.

  • How do you want it changed?
  • By the way, your first comma needs to be a period/full stop.
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How do you want it changed?

By the way, your first comma needs to be a period/full stop.

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