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Hamxiaoz Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

How to avoid the replication in this sentence?

Hi, I'm writing an essey about enviroment. Here is the sentence:

"In this case, we should negotiate with local governments which don't offer recycling programs and persuade them to provide recycling programs."

Thanks.
  

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" It sounds fine, but I would place a comma after programs.

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  • " It sounds fine, but I would place a comma after programs.
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hamxiaoz
"In this case, we should negotiate with local governments which don't offer recycling programs, and persuade them to provide recycling programs."


It sounds fine, but I would place a comma after programs.
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is there any way to remove the second "recycling programs"?
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How about this ....

"In this case, we should negotiate with local governments and persuade them to install recycling programs which are not currently available/ established.
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