How to ask a permission to police commissioner to keepbpo at night times

i wrote a letter to police commissioner regarding to keep a bpo .we want to run the company for 24/7, how to write a letter for permission . please check it out wheather the below letter is correct or not with correct grammar









We kindly bring into your notice that we are starting a BPO , Company named as Our Source 2 India at seethamadhara near NRI hospital , Visakhapatnam. Will run this company round the clock i.e., for 24/7 .As company hires both girls and boys we need your permission .

We shall be much obliged if you could kindly permit us to run the company as it is both US and UK based.we assure that our workers will be safe as we are providing pick up and drop for them.

I’m sure you agree this need s without delay.



Thanking you

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