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Anhtu214 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
How to analyze the question in wrting task 2?
Hi there,
(At last time, I made a whole essay and the result was so disappointed to me, even I did fix 2 times. Therefore, I've decided to write a smaller part to control my errors better)
Now I want to start from the first place. I have a Task 2 question and I wonder if my targets right or wrong. I need your help.
The topic is: The idea of going overseas for university is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better because of the difficulties a student inevitably ecounters living and studying in a different culture.
What's your opinion?
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I mean to write the disadvantages in the body
Here is my two introductions in the essay:
1. Nowadays, it's exhilarated for someone to have chance of studying in a foreign university. In my point of view, though it has many good points, going overseas somehow drives students confused by some troubles in new life such as custom, homesick or simply food.
(Just analyze the different culture a student have to face)
2. Nowadays, it's exhilarated for someone to have chance of studying in a foreign university. People suppose that it may help learners to improve language skills, become more mature. In my point of view, going overseas somehow may drive students confused by some troubles in new life such as , homesick or simply food.
(Analyze both the good points and the bad points)
Which one is better?
(At last time, I made a whole essay and the result was so disappointed to me, even I did fix 2 times. Therefore, I've decided to write a smaller part to control my errors better)
Now I want to start from the first place. I have a Task 2 question and I wonder if my targets right or wrong. I need your help.
The topic is: The idea of going overseas for university is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better because of the difficulties a student inevitably ecounters living and studying in a different culture.
What's your opinion?
______________________________________________
I mean to write the disadvantages in the body
Here is my two introductions in the essay:
1. Nowadays, it's exhilarated for someone to have chance of studying in a foreign university. In my point of view, though it has many good points, going overseas somehow drives students confused by some troubles in new life such as custom, homesick or simply food.
(Just analyze the different culture a student have to face)
2. Nowadays, it's exhilarated for someone to have chance of studying in a foreign university. People suppose that it may help learners to improve language skills, become more mature. In my point of view, going overseas somehow may drive students confused by some troubles in new life such as , homesick or simply food.
(Analyze both the good points and the bad points)
Which one is better?
Top answer
Neither one is acceptable because neither addresses the question. The assertion of the topic is that that difficulties encountered are good for the student: they create challenges (facing a new culture) and build character.
- Neither one is acceptable because neither addresses the question.
- The assertion of the topic is that that difficulties encountered are good for the student: they create challenges (facing a new culture) and build character.
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Neither one is acceptable because neither addresses the question. The assertion of the topic is that that difficulties encountered are good for the student: they create challenges (facing a new culture) and build character.
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oh I see, thank you very much. I really did the wrong answer.
Ok, I will fix it soon and post back.
Ok, I will fix it soon and post back.
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This is my rewrite:
Nowadays, it's exhilarated for someone to have chance of studying in a foreign university. In my point of view, despite many difficulties of going overseas, student could learn from them to improve language skills, become more mature and exposure to new custom.
However, I'm not sure that is correct. I'm quite confused with the question. Anyone can hel
Nowadays, it's exhilarated for someone to have chance of studying in a foreign university. In my point of view, despite many difficulties of going overseas, student could learn from them to improve language skills, become more mature and exposure to new custom.
However, I'm not sure that is correct. I'm quite confused with the question. Anyone can hel
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Nowadays, it is exhilarating for someone to have a chance to study in a foreign university. Despite the many difficulties of living overseas, students can learn from them to improve language skills, become more mature and discover new customs.
This is OK as an introductory sentence. How you answer it is a purely personal thing, but if
This is OK as an introductory sentence. How you answer it is a purely personal thing, but if
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