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MUSCOVITE Posted 16 years ago
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How to amend/correct this sentense?
"Once the new files have been successfully imported, a new subnet, which is the second of a total of two subnets in our network, will display on the map."
If you could help me improve the wording?
( Objective: make the sentence shorter...and less formal ).
thank you!
muscovite
If you could help me improve the wording?
( Objective: make the sentence shorter...and less formal ).
thank you!
muscovite
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" If you could help me improve the wording? and less formal ). After the new files have been imported, you'll see a new subnet on the map.
- " If you could help me improve the wording?
- and less formal ).
- After the new files have been imported, you'll see a new subnet on the map.
- This is the last one in our demo network.
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Hi,
Once the new files have been successfully imported, a new subnet, which is the second of a total of two subnets in our demo network, will display on the map."
If you could help me improve the wording?
( Objective: make the sentence shorter...and less formal ).
After the new files have been imported, you'll see
Once the new files have been successfully imported, a new subnet, which is the second of a total of two subnets in our demo network, will display on the map."
If you could help me improve the wording?
( Objective: make the sentence shorter...and less formal ).
After the new files have been imported, you'll see
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