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Hi! Coul you help me on checking this thanks note please!!!

Hi everyone! I'd like to espress a BIG Thank you for coming to Sandy & Sussy baby-shower and for the cute gifts you brought for them! All Rocks!!! It was really nice to see you and I really appreciate your friendship. I hope you guys had lots of fun like I did w/all of you and w/my preggies friends! Love you all!! Yours: Hojita

Bob Collins · Accepted Answer

Since you're trying for a light, informal tone, let's try this ...
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Thank you so much for coming to the baby shower for Sandy and Sussy, and for the cute gifts. They all rocked! It was rally nice to see you - you're such a dear friend! I hope you had as much fun as I did.

Love you,
Hojita
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If you are sending out individual thank you notes, even if each note says the same thing, you should make them sound personal. Speak to each person, not to everyone, since just one person will be reading each note. I left out the "preggies" comment because some might find this term offensive. You can add it back in if you're sure your group of friends will be open to it.

If you have questions, let me know!

Hojita · Answer

Thank you so much Mr. Collins for your help!

Have a great day!

Hojita

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