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Creativeguru Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

how this sentence sounds?

Even ‘infinite’ is just a drop in the vast ocean, when it comes to the universe of your wonderful life here.
  

Top answer

It sounded profoundly correct. But what does it mean? It sounds like some kind of metaphor.

  • It sounded profoundly correct.
  • But what does it mean?
  • It sounds like some kind of metaphor.
  • Can you expend on that?
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It sounded profoundly correct. But what does it mean? I am guessing....It sounds like some kind of metaphor. Can you expend on that?
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Talking about the ocean and the universe together like this is mixing metaphors.

Clive
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It is a content for a luxurious residence project brochure. I just want to say that there is lots of spaces for you here.

Thanks
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My advice is to say what you mean more clearly and directly.
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how about this?

‘Happy Living’ is just a drop in the vast ocean, when it comes to the universe of your wonderful life here.
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Frankly, I think it sounds ludicrous and meaningless.
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thanks for honest feedback
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Should be fine for a luxurious residence project brochure, then. Emotion: wink

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