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Angliholic Posted 18 years ago
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how the city was making its way to globalization
During my stay in Taipei, I was impressed with how the city was making its way to globalization.
... how the city was going on globalizing.
HI,
I think the above two convey different ideas but the second makes more sense. Am I right? Thanks.
... how the city was going on globalizing.
HI,
I think the above two convey different ideas but the second makes more sense. Am I right? Thanks.
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Both are awkward and somewhat out of register, the second more so. I suggest: During my stay in Taipei, I was impressed with how the city was globalizing / continuing to globalize / advancing toward globalization.
- Both are awkward and somewhat out of register, the second more so.
- I suggest: During my stay in Taipei, I was impressed with how the city was globalizing / continuing to globalize / advancing toward globalization.
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Both are awkward and somewhat out of register, the second more so. I suggest:
During my stay in Taipei, I was impressed with how the city was globalizing / continuing to globalize / advancing toward globalization.
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Both are awkward and somewhat out of register, the second more so. I suggest:
During my stay in Taipei, I was impressed with how the city was globalizing / continuing to globalize / advancing toward globalization.
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