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Recky982 Posted 15 years ago
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How should I write this

hi, can any one help me out to figurout which one of this is correct. Pls correct if any mistake in the sentence aswell

- sujcet to the telephonic conversation on yesterday, I would like to follow up the progress on your decision

- sujcet to yesterday's telephonic conversation, I would like to follow up the progress on your decision
  

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Hi, Neither version is good. I suggest Further to yesterday's phone conversation, I would like to ask if you have made a decision yet. Clive

  • Hi, Neither version is good.
  • I suggest Further to yesterday's phone conversation, I would like to ask if you have made a decision yet.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Neither version is good.

I suggest

Further to yesterday's phone conversation, I would like to ask if you have made a decision yet.

Clive
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Thank you very much!!! Clive

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