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Kbq123 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

How should i rephrase this?

I have a headache trying to rephrase my introduction.
It sounds very awarkd and wrong. Can someone help me and give me advise?
Thanks in advance.

Last year in November, Seal Shield Corporation announced its industry-leading washable keyboard, using the latest waterproof and anti-bacterial patent technology, was made from an antimicrobial plastic that contained natural bacteria repellant the silver ions, and was also dishwasher safe for easy cleaning.
  

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In November last year, Seal Shield Corporation announced its industry leading washable keyboard, which uses the latest waterproof and antibacterial patent technology. It was made from an antimicrobial plastic that contained silver ions, the natural bacteria repellants, and was also dishwasher safe for easy cleaning.

— Zafar142003

  • In November last year, Seal Shield Corporation announced its industry leading washable keyboard, which uses the latest waterproof and antibacterial patent technology.
  • It was made from an antimicrobial plastic that contained silver ions, the natural bacteria repellants, and was also dishwasher safe for easy cleaning.
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In November last year, Seal Shield Corporation announced its industry leading washable keyboard, which uses the latest waterproof and antibacterial patent technology. It was made from an antimicrobial plastic that contained silver ions, the natural bacteria repellants, and was also dishwasher safe for easy cleaning.
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