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Chivalry Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

How should I phrase this sentence to make it better?

"You can bring as many of your friends as possible, so will I bring my company!"

Is there anything in this sentence that is not making sense or mistaken?

Or is there a better expression for the context?

Thanks in advance!
  

Top answer

I'd say You can bring as many of your friends as you want, and I'll bring my whole company! but then I don't know exactly what you're trying to say. CJ

  • I'd say You can bring as many of your friends as you want, and I'll bring my whole company!
  • but then I don't know exactly what you're trying to say.
  • CJ
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I'd say

You can bring as many of your friends as you want, and I'll bring my whole company!

but then I don't know exactly what you're trying to say.

CJ
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CalifJimI'd say You can bring as many of your friends as you want, and I'll bring my whole company! but then I don't know exactly what you're trying to say. CJ
WHAT? HOW SO?

I'm trying to convince my friend to bring as many of his friends to a party as I will be bringing my company(like my pals and friends), too.

Does that make sense to you n
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"You can bring as many friends as you would like, and I'll bring mine as well!"
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chivalryAnd what's confusing in the original sentence I wrote? Does it rather send a wrong message?
Your use of the word "company" suggests than you are the owner of a company. Whether that's a large company of several thousand employees or a small company of just a few employees I don't know. But it appears now that you did not mean that.

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