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Wwj0905 Posted 11 years ago
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how shall i improve this sentence

Hi, is the sentence below correct? How shall I improve it? Thank you very much.

“Accordingly, the higher current density is expected for device A than device B due to the larger light harvesting induced by rough substrate surface.”
  

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Accordingly, a higher current density is expected for device A than device B because of the greater light harvest induced by the rough substrate. (substrate = surface)

  • Accordingly, a higher current density is expected for device A than device B because of the greater light harvest induced by the rough substrate.
  • (substrate = surface)
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Accordingly, a higher current density is expected for device A than device B because of the greater light harvest induced by the rough substrate.

(substrate = surface)
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Mister MicawberAccordingly, a higher current density is expected for device A than device B because of the greater light harvest induced by the rough substrate.(substrate = surface)
Thank you very much for your help.

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