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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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How is this sentence?
I wrote a sentence in response to what somebody said about how members of the Society for Creative Anachronism fight. Here is the sentence:
"Which is more like how actual fights at close range go than in a martial arts school and films"
How is it?
"Which is more like how actual fights at close range go than in a martial arts school and films"
How is it?
Top answer
It isn't a very good sentence.
- It isn't a very good sentence.
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First, "which" is not a main sentence subject. You need to use "that" or start with something that "which" refers to.
Second, the last part of the sentence (after "than") sounds very awkward because it lacks parallel structures.
That is more like how actual fights at close range go than you will see in a martial arts school (singular) and in films (plur
Second, the last part of the sentence (after "than") sounds very awkward because it lacks parallel structures.
That is more like how actual fights at close range go than you will see in a martial arts school (singular) and in films (plur
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