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Chrismlangan Posted 19 years ago
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P.S. I also remember waking up one night with the covers over my head, struggling to escape and feeling as though something were trying to suffocate me, when I was a boy.
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S. I also remember waking up one night with the covers over my head, struggling to escape and feeling as though something were trying to suffocate me, when I was a boy. This is pretty good.
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- I also remember waking up one night with the covers over my head, struggling to escape and feeling as though something were trying to suffocate me, when I was a boy.
- This is pretty good.
- I'd move the last clause.
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Hi,
P.S. I also remember waking up one night with the covers over my head, struggling to escape and feeling as though something were trying to suffocate me, when I was a boy.
This is pretty good. I'd move the last clause.
P.S. I also remember, when I was a boy,
waking up one night with the covers over my head, strugglin
P.S. I also remember waking up one night with the covers over my head, struggling to escape and feeling as though something were trying to suffocate me, when I was a boy.
This is pretty good. I'd move the last clause.
P.S. I also remember, when I was a boy,
waking up one night with the covers over my head, strugglin
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if we put "when i was a boy", then is this sentence a loosen sentence? in other word, if we put the clause at the end, will it become a periodic sentence?
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Hi,
I also remember, when I was a boy, waking up one night with the covers over my head, struggling to escape and feeling as though something were trying to suffocate me.
if we put "when i was a boy", then is this sentence a loosen sentence? in other word, if we put the clause at the end, will it become a periodic senten
I also remember, when I was a boy, waking up one night with the covers over my head, struggling to escape and feeling as though something were trying to suffocate me.
if we put "when i was a boy", then is this sentence a loosen sentence? in other word, if we put the clause at the end, will it become a periodic senten
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