How is this as a thesis statement for art history?

In the 19^th century art enthusiast would be taken on a journey that led them from wrangle to wonder. A movement against Neo-Classicism and Enlightenment art, with its weighty efforts to replicate classical principals of rationality, morality and restraint, birth a movement called Romanticism. Joseph Mallord William Turner embraces the Romanticism art movement as it strives to introduce art as an emotional experience, to arouse the imagination of the viewer, to stimulate feelings versus reality and have an alluring fantasy with nature. You will see that Joseph Mallord William Turner changes the way we look at history paintings as he creates monumental sublime landscape works of art that display the might of nature, its terror, its forcefulness, and man’s helplessness, and vulnerability. He captures history, horror and Mother Nature’s hunger in an amazing masterpiece, titled: The Burning of the Houses of Lords and Commons, October 16, 1834-35, painted in oil on canvas. This painting is beautifully energetic, supernatural and powerful.