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Lordskorpz Posted 8 years ago
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The classical composer, Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart once lived in Vienna, Austria. He composed nearly 1,000 pieces of music. He is believed by many, to be a child prodigy. He composed his first concerto at the age of 5, his first opera at the age of 9 and his first symphony at the age of 11!

(I am fully aware that my paragraph is not entirely authentic, I didn't intend it to be)

  

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'to be a child prodigy ' sounds like he is still alive. I've also removed a few commas. Say eg The classical composer Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart once lived in Vienna, Austria.

  • 'to be a child prodigy ' sounds like he is still alive.
  • I've also removed a few commas.
  • Say eg The classical composer Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart once lived in Vienna, Austria.
  • He composed nearly 1,000 pieces of music.
  • He is believed by many to have been a child prodigy.
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'to be a child prodigy' sounds like he is still alive.

I've also removed a few commas.


Say eg The classical composer Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart once lived in Vienna, Austria. He composed nearly 1,000 pieces of music. He is believed by many to have been a child prodigy. He composed his first concerto at the age of 5, his first opera at the age of 9 and his first sym

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