How I proceed wity my work

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Hello,In referencing a paragraph containing a step-by-step description of my work/project,* would it make sense to say- What follows is a description of how I proceed with my work?I mean, do you use that turn of phrase? Should I rather say of how my work is carried out? Are there better alternates?[EDIT] *I think I should mention that it's an art project.Thank you so much for your helpH.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

What follows is a description of my work.

Henry74 · Answer

Mister MicawberWhat follows is a description of my work.

Thank you.
To be honest, I was looking for a phrase that could capture the sense of motion inherent to this work.
"A description of my work" can be said of a lot of things: paintings, sculptures, etc. It has a certain static ring to my ear (but perhaps I'm hearing it wrong).
What I'm referring to is a performance that spans numerous days, which makes use of different media to generate a sequence of art actions, each leading to the next.
That's why I was trying to use a verb of motion in the header. Do you think it could be done?

Thank you
H.

Mister Micawber · Answer

Henry74Do you think it could be done?

I think it is verbose and unnecessary. What I have given you is common, standard and idiomatic.

Henry74 · Answer

Mister MicawberWhat I have given you is common, standard and idiomatic.

Okay then. Thanks.

H.

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