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"I remember how it felt like to have everything I wanted, to think that nothing bad was going to happen and all the stories I’d ever heard were just fictions. Growing up has always been so hard for me, moving on to the next phase is like my whole life is upside down. I never really know how I feel, I don’t know if I should feel this way. Am I supposed to? I really don’t know. I’d always known and been so sure of what I was until I realized nothing was ever the same anymore. I was so scared to let go of things I held on to for so long. I had to let go, and now it never stops coming back. I can’t stop thinking about it. I keep on turning back and living in it. That’s where I’m breaking. I can never let it all go… even if I wanted to."
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In terms of correct English, I'd give it an 8 or 9. There are just a couple of small mistakes. In terms of interest and originality of expression, probably a 3, sorry.
- In terms of correct English, I'd give it an 8 or 9.
- There are just a couple of small mistakes.
- In terms of interest and originality of expression, probably a 3, sorry.
- After the first sentence, I had almost no interest in reading on.
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In terms of correct English, I'd give it an 8 or 9. There are just a couple of small mistakes.
In terms of interest and originality of expression, probably a 3, sorry. After the first sentence, I had almost no interest in reading on.
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