How does this sound? What do I need to remake?

"You won’t find such teasers and squabblers as these Taichuits are throughout the steppe.

Did you hear how he spoke to me? That’s not just because their tribe has beaten our tribe. These redheads consider all the people beneath themselves. Sure, they were created by heaven!”

Chiledu vented his anger on the oxen; he lashed both of them, and dark stripes covered their sweaty backs.

“How so – created by heaven?”