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Plexo Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
How does this sentence sound?
Dyspnea is a clinical problem that has many causes, with pneumonia one of them.
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How would you improve it?
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Dyspnea is a clinical problem that has many causes, with pneumonia one of them. It's okay. ' Welcome to the forums!
- Dyspnea is a clinical problem that has many causes, with pneumonia one of them.
- It's okay.
- ' Welcome to the forums!
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Dyspnea is a clinical problem that has many causes, with pneumonia one of them. It's okay.
I would say 'Dyspnea is a medical symptom that has many causes, pneumonia being one of them.'
Welcome to the forums!
I would say 'Dyspnea is a medical symptom that has many causes, pneumonia being one of them.'
Welcome to the forums!
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Thank you very much!!
What about this one: Dyspnea is a clinical problem that has many causes including pneumonia.
It sounds better to me but I'm not quite sure.
What about this one: Dyspnea is a clinical problem that has many causes including pneumonia.
It sounds better to me but I'm not quite sure.
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plexoThank you very much!!What about this one: Dyspnea is a clinical problem that has many causes, including pneumonia. It sounds better to me but I'm not quite sure.The reason I changed it is that the problem is actually the pneumonia. 'dyspnea' is a symptom of the pneumonia. I think it'
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