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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

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Hi Richard - I do hope you are OK. I can only assume going by your previous email that you are in very poor health. If you can't facilitate my coming to visit you, there has to be something terribly wrong. Are you going to hospital, and if so, what for?

Please do reply to this email.

does this sound ok? How would you change it to make it read better?
  

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Anonymous How would you change it to make it read better? Hi Richard, I do hope you are OK. Are you going into hospital?

— Mister Micawber

  • Anonymous How would you change it to make it read better?
  • Hi Richard, I do hope you are OK.
  • Are you going into hospital?
  • Please let me know, (signed)
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AnonymousHow would you change it to make it read better?
Hi Richard,

I do hope you are OK. Are you going into hospital?

Please let me know,

(signed)
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