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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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0Hi,02br
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00I saw a part of an AD that said something like this:02br
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00JOB FAIR02br
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00Dec. 8&9, 2006 7:30 AM - 4:00 PM02br
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00MWD WEYMOUTH TREATMENT PLANT02br
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00700 North Moreno Avenue02br
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00Laverne, CA 9175002br
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00Can I write it like this?02br
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00We will have our Job Fair. It will be held on December 8 and 9 of 2006, from 7:30 AM till 4:00 PM, at the MWD Weymouth Treatment Plant. The address of the plant is 700 North Moreno Avenue, Laverne, CA 91750.02br
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0We will have our Job Fair. this sounds rather informal - or as if it had been in doubt that the fair would be held and you are now able to confirm it. Better to start:02br 02br 00We will hold a ob Fair on on December 8 and 9, 2006, from 7:30 AM till 4:00 PM, at the MWD Weymouth Treatment Plant.

— Nona the brit

  • 0We will have our Job Fair.
  • this sounds rather informal - or as if it had been in doubt that the fair would be held and you are now able to confirm it.
  • Better to start:02br 02br 00We will hold a ob Fair on on December 8 and 9, 2006, from 7:30 AM till 4:00 PM, at the MWD Weymouth Treatment Plant.
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0We will have our Job Fair. this sounds rather informal - or as if it had been in doubt that the fair would be held and you are now able to confirm it. Better to start:02br
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00We will hold a ob Fair on on December 8 and 9, 2006, from 7:30 AM till 4:00 PM, at the MWD Weymouth Treatment Plant. The address of the plant is 700 North Moreno Avenue, Laverne, CA 91750.02br
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01cite10Nona The Brit12cite10We will have our Job Fair. this sounds rather informal - or as if it had been in doubt that the fair would be held and you are now able to confirm it. Better to start:12br
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10We will hold a ob Fair on on December 8 and 9, 2006, from 7:30 AM till 4:00 PM, at the MWD Weymouth Treatment P
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0What about this one,02br
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00"We will hold a Job Fair on on December 8 and 9, 2006, from 7:30 AM till 4:00 PM, at the MWD Weymouth Treatment Plant. 01del00The address of the plant is 02del01font00, 02font00700 North Moreno Avenue, Laverne, CA 91750."02br
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0Hi, Nona.02br
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00When you have capitalized a name and made it to be a proper name, could that name take on an article like 'a' in the case as you seem to have? I think they usually take on the article 'the'.02br
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00We will hold 01u00a (J??)ob Fair02u00 on on December 8 and 9, 2006 ... 0-
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01cite10Believer12cite10Hi, Nona.12br
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10When you have capitalized a name and made it to be a proper name, could that name take on an article like 'a' in the case as you seem to have? I think they usually take on the article 'the'.12br
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10We will hold 11u10a (J??)ob Fair12u
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