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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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How do you say this for a movie review?

How do you say this?

  1. The movie starts off very strong but its impact lessens as the running time goes up, it becomes a bit repetitive.
  

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First, it needs to be broken into 2 sentences.

  • First, it needs to be broken into 2 sentences.
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First, it needs to be broken into 2 sentences.
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Is this better sir?

The movie starts off very strong but its impact lessens as the running time goes up. It becomes a bit repetitive.
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Yes.

The movie starts off very strong, but its impact lessens as it progresses. It becomes a bit repetitive.

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