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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Vocabulary
How do you say the following in natural english
The mild mischief on her face gave way to an expression taut with passion and her lips parted to mime the moans that stopped at her throat.
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eg Her expression changed from mischievous to passionate. She looked like she wanted to moan.
- eg Her expression changed from mischievous to passionate.
- She looked like she wanted to moan.
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eg Her expression changed from mischievous to passionate. She looked like she wanted to moan.
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Thank you very much. How do I keep details like parting of lips and suppression of moans and still sound natural?
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Such details seem to me to be overblown and florid. If you want to include them. I suggest you just keep the original wording.
To me it is unnatural because it sounds like a sentence from a fourth-rate novel.
Clive
To me it is unnatural because it sounds like a sentence from a fourth-rate novel.
Clive
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