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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

How do you rewrite this sentence?

The following sentences taken from letters are discourteous, boastful, excessively

humble, vague, or lacking the “you attitude.” Rewrite them to correct

those mistakes.

It is apparent that you are in business to rip off the public
  

Top answer

Hi, Perhaps you should consider providing customers with improved service and better value for money. Clive

  • Hi, Perhaps you should consider providing customers with improved service and better value for money.
  • Clive
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Hi,



Perhaps you should consider providing customers with improved service and better value for money.



Clive
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Anonymousrewrite this sentence.

do your own work or get a zero in my class.

Personal Communication. Rasmussen, ocala

My best rewrite of that would be: Do you recognize irony when it is staring you in the face?
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It is apparent that you are in business to rip off the public.

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