How do you feel about this sentence?
"Although he is one of the directors who makes little money, he continues his careers as a director until now, so I think that he is great."
Is the sentence natural to native English speakers or should I correct some expressions or grammar?
What do you native English speakers think?
Thank you so much as usual.
Top answer
The grammar is not right. " Now is is a question of wording and style, and everybody will write this differently. " "Great" is weak.
- The grammar is not right.
- " Now is is a question of wording and style, and everybody will write this differently.
- " "Great" is weak.
- Choose something that says what you want to say about him, like "admirable" or "among the great directors", etc.
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The grammar is not right. "Although he is one of the directors who makes little money, he has continued his career as a director until now, so I think that he is great." Now is is a question of wording and style, and everybody will write this differently. For example, "Although he is one of the directors who makes little money, he has persevered, so I think that he is great." "Great" is weak.
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