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Miyabi Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

How do I say this in Eng?

Grammar check pls:

"My dog loves eating very much. Every time when I try to feed her and hold her food or snack in hands, she just so excited and the water from her mouth just can't help dribbling." ---> I don't think this is the correct Eng. How do I say it in Eng?

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My dog loves eating very much. Every time that I feed her and hold her food or snack in my hand, she becomes very excited and drools.

  • My dog loves eating very much.
  • Every time that I feed her and hold her food or snack in my hand, she becomes very excited and drools.
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My dog loves eating very much. Every time that I feed her and hold her food or snack in my hand, she becomes very excited and drools.

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