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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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How do I reword this sentence to make it clearer?
Hi, how would I make this sentence more concise and clear?
Dirt from our hike to the top is smeared across his favorite t-shirt, blurring the white logo.
Thank you for your help
Dirt from our hike to the top is smeared across his favorite t-shirt, blurring the white logo.
Thank you for your help
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I don't think you can make it much more concise. However, I would reorganize it for clarity: Our hike to the top left dirt smeared across his favorite t-shirt, blurring the white logo.
- I don't think you can make it much more concise.
- However, I would reorganize it for clarity: Our hike to the top left dirt smeared across his favorite t-shirt, blurring the white logo.
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I don't think you can make it much more concise. However, I would reorganize it for clarity:
Our hike to the top left dirt smeared across his favorite t-shirt, blurring the white logo.
Our hike to the top left dirt smeared across his favorite t-shirt, blurring the white logo.
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