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Atlanta is a common population ;in the U.S. of Georgia . It is eight hours from Indianapolis, Indiana . It has several streets named after it such as Martin Luther King Jr. Most of the people who live in Atlanta Georgia are mostly celebrities such Chris Bridges known as Ludacris and Ciara Harris known as Ciara . Atlanta Georgia is the best palce to go forn an vacation . I enjoy going to Georgia for several reason s . First of all , I can spend time with my father . Since I live with my mother in Indianapolis, and my father lives in Atlanta we only visit so often . However , the time we do spend together its always family time . Sometimes we make homemade flatbread pizza , and homemade chocolate chip cookies too . Another reason is , because I can view the whole city of Atlanta If I wanted to . If I wanted to get a job quick the only place I would go is Atlanta Georgia . Also If I wanted to buy some shoes never had before I would get them from a place called the underground station in atlanta too . Everything there is great and fun . Most importanly you don't have to live thereto know about it either .