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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Without a warning the filthy 4x4 bellows at me with its horn warning me to move. I was so close to getting hit. The fifthy man who had just emerged out of the car started shouting at me. he was so rude and arrogant it wasnt my fault he crashed into me. suddenly all of the cars had stopped and everyone was shouting at each other to move along. without noticing there was a massive traffic jam and the fifthy man had caused it all and was blaming everyting on me. there was so much noise i couldnt concentrate on anything. There was know an immense croud rushing to stick there noses in. some one went and called the police. The Police woman who looked as if she was in her late thirties  approched me and the man and asked us what had happened so we both explained our side of the story and she told us that we i should just aplologise. i did becuase i know that i was already running late and my boss wouyld shout at me. then i wouldnt get that promotion and i worser i will get fired. I said sorry and he gave a disgustingly ugly grin and went back to his car and so did all the other cars. Everyone else got to what they were orginally doing. I wasnt going to let this ruin my day I walked off.
I saw the 264 bus so I ran as fast as i could. luckily the driver was very nice and stopped the bus for me.
  
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