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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

How do I make these sentence more natural?

Sale Representatives do these followings:
Take care of the store
Responsible for stock
Increase sales to meet the target
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These list are quite sounds unnatural for me.

  

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Why would a sales representative take care of a store? Isn't that the responsibility of the store manager? Why would a sales representative have anything to do with stock?

  • Why would a sales representative take care of a store?
  • Isn't that the responsibility of the store manager?
  • Why would a sales representative have anything to do with stock?
  • Do you mean the stock in an individual store?
  • Do you mean the stock in a warehouse?
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Why would a sales representative take care of a store? Isn't that the responsibility of the store manager?

Why would a sales representative have anything to do with stock? Do you mean the stock in an individual store? Do you mean the stock in a warehouse? In any case, neither of those sound like something a sales representative would take care of.

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